Thursday, 13 November 2014

Passion Learning journal

This week for Inquiry we have been doing a passion learning journal and our project is making a castle We are making it for room 7 because they don't have much stuff in their class.
And I hope they like the castle We made for them.

Friday, 24 October 2014

buddy Reading with room 9

On Friday I enjoyed reading with my buddy Zeke we read our books to each other I liked his book because It had lots of amazing words. He liked how I read my book.       

Wednesday, 15 October 2014

On the Hoildays

Last Wednesday

Last Wednesday my brother and I went to the farm. We played with the bulls. We went home and I played on the PS3 game. The game was called Dead Rising 2. It’s about when you go around killing zombies with shotguns- pistols and snipers.  Then the next day we went paint ball shooting. I shot my van then the paint went inside the van.  when I went inside I got a growling.


Wednesday, 13 August 2014

show don't tell

13 of august
WALT show don’t tell to build the efferents in our head
once upon a time there was a man his name was bob Marley he could break anything with his big hands. and his sharp claws could break poles sticks and tables. his hands can stick to anything.

his her is very long it could touch his toes.when ever he shakes his her it could change colours like blue and red.  

Friday, 1 August 2014

A few days ago we learnt how to show not tell our emotion with Miss Smith, we also looked at using third person, How do you think I went?

I will begin by describing what the characters body felt like.
I will describe what they were thinking
I will leave the audience hanging

His mouth was dry. he felt like his heart was going to blast, out. and he bite all of his fingernails off. and his head and his hands were shaking.
and he nearly died. he was quietly running, around. and his teeth were chattering. then he saw a big black shadow walk past. then he heard  banging like a giant was coming for him. then he heard the laugh like a clown and he was shivering.     

Monday, 28 July 2014

the witch

Kristy was walking through the forest she saw an Apple under the bush, it was blue so she ate it. Suddenly she turned into an ugly witch, with long black hair, big black cloak and a green bubbly face she freaked out and screamed “nooooo”. The next day she found some mushrooms, they were brown and white so she ate them, The Mushrooms must have been magical because next kristy turned back into a girl, where she had her golden hair, her colourful jeans, her green spotty top and her black leather jacket? and she felt ecstatic  

Friday, 25 July 2014

today me and hone were doing this colouring" and we were doing this so you can do it to I think we done great colouring" I think next time we should take more detail away and I done the best work.