Thursday, 13 November 2014
Friday, 24 October 2014
Wednesday, 15 October 2014
Last Wednesday my brother and I went to the farm. We played with the bulls. We went home and I played on the PS3 game. The game was called Dead Rising 2. It’s about when you go around killing zombies with shotguns- pistols and snipers. Then the next day we went paint ball shooting. I shot my van then the paint went inside the van. when I went inside I got a growling.
Posted by Anonymous at 09:29
Wednesday, 13 August 2014
13 of august
WALT show don’t tell to build the efferents in our head
once upon a time there was a man his name was bob Marley he could break anything with his big hands. and his sharp claws could break poles sticks and tables. his hands can stick to anything.
his her is very long it could touch his toes.when ever he shakes his her it could change colours like blue and red.
Posted by Anonymous at 09:56
Friday, 1 August 2014
A few days ago we learnt how to show not tell our emotion with Miss Smith, we also looked at using third person, How do you think I went?
I will begin by describing what the characters body felt like.
I will describe what they were thinkingI will leave the audience hanging
His mouth was dry. he felt like his heart was going to blast, out. and he bite all of his fingernails off. and his head and his hands were shaking.
and he nearly died. he was quietly running, around. and his teeth were chattering. then he saw a big black shadow walk past. then he heard banging like a giant was coming for him. then he heard the laugh like a clown and he was shivering.
Posted by Anonymous at 09:41
Monday, 28 July 2014
Kristy was walking through the forest she saw an Apple under the bush, it was blue so she ate it. Suddenly she turned into an ugly witch, with long black hair, big black cloak and a green bubbly face she freaked out and screamed “nooooo”. The next day she found some mushrooms, they were brown and white so she ate them, The Mushrooms must have been magical because next kristy turned back into a girl, where she had her golden hair, her colourful jeans, her green spotty top and her black leather jacket? and she felt ecstatic
Posted by Anonymous at 10:23
Friday, 25 July 2014
today me and hone were doing this colouring" and we were doing this so you can do it to I think we done great colouring" I think next time we should take more detail away and I done the best work.
Posted by Anonymous at 09:49