Wednesday, 13 August 2014

show don't tell

13 of august
WALT show don’t tell to build the efferents in our head
once upon a time there was a man his name was bob Marley he could break anything with his big hands. and his sharp claws could break poles sticks and tables. his hands can stick to anything.

his her is very long it could touch his toes.when ever he shakes his her it could change colours like blue and red.  

3 comments:

  1. Kia ora Joshua from Mrs Morgan-French. I like the part about how Bob's hair changes colour when he shakes it. Miharo..

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  2. hi joshua i like how you said bob marley can break walls. i like bob marley to
    from Arapeta

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